Sunday, December 10, 2006

Haiku #7-061210

So, I was talking to my pops yesterday and he was saying that he thinks that all of the syllables in haikus are supposed to be used up with meaningful words. Basically, no words like and, is, it, but, etc. So, I will be attempting to be more discerning with my syllable choices. Here is my first attempt.

White Elephant gifts
Covetting Scott's s'more maker
Re-gifting cheese knives?

There you go, P Skoglund. I hope that these syllables are more significant.

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